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01:25 - "our place" sounds weird. maybe something more like "our school"? I dunno 02:23 - I think there should be a comma after "here"? 02:48 - "is" -> "are" 03:20 - Comma needed after "miss you" 03:53 - I think bento should be translated. >_> 04:14 - The "huh?" starts early... move it away from the scene change. 05:29 - Fade it! (Her dad is a tree? lolwut? I already read a book series where someone turned into a tree... and another series where a girl talks to trees... lawl) 06:57 - Add a bit more lead out 07:32 - "By" -> "Before"? The current line sounds awkward ~07:35 - You're missing the father's response 10:27 - fade 12:23 - "They're" -> "It's" 12:26 - get rid of the "from" 13:45 - fade 15:38 - I think Lunar timing would work best here... or at least add an ellipse in there. 19:17 - That line cut off WAY too early 20:22 - Uhhhhhhh forget to sub a part here? Le Note: Styling looks fine. I don't much care for the "i" character, but meh, whatever. AND OMG THE BGM IN THIS IS AMAZING ;__; WANT OST [b]NOW[/b]